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[Teaser #1] The Pervert in the Back of the Class

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         She was incredible, everyone had their eyes pinned on her. She was the one for Sora, the woman of his dreams, his darkest sexual fantasies. Curvy thighs, slim waist, short fiery red hair, a pretty face and breasts the size of one’s handful, fitting perfectly in one’s palm as if asking to be caressed.  She didn’t mind the looks, except one. Sora had his eyes locked on her just like everyone else but there was something about his face, something indecent. Riko could tell and as their eyes met, in that instant, she gave him the most menacing, criticizing look, digging into his soul. At that moment she knew. She pouted. Sora panicked and swiftly looked the other way, trying to play it off, as if nothing happened. He pretended to be looking out the window for a while, stealing small glimpses every once in a while, wondering if Riko still had her eyes locked on him. She didn’t. She kept reading for the class with the same finesse and grace as always. Sora felt bad, “another one that got away.”, he thought to himself.

         The bell rang and it was time for everyone to go home. Sora was the first one to go, trying to get out of class as fast as possible is order to avoid any contact, with anyone. He felt belittled, a failure. He rushed through the corridors, down the stairs. He was mad at himself. Exiting the school yard he realized that, in his rush, he forgot to take his books with him. That would rarely be a problem for him since he didn’t care that much about school, but they had a mandatory assignment due on Monday and he didn’t want his parents to get contacted and reminded of his incompetence. He rushed back into the school, bumping into the last people leaving, running up the stairs to his classroom. All the halls were empty, being Friday, everyone rushed off to enjoy their weekend.

         As he was getting closer to his classroom, he kept hearing a strange faint noise...

To be continued...

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northernfly's avatar
The style is great! Very descriptive and flowing. I especially like the bold use of a brief but appropriate sentence like; She pouted.' I also really liked 'she gave him the most menacing, criticizing look, digging into his soul' which I think is bold and bulletproof. However, I think it could be part of a run on sentence, and I think it could stand alone. I feel that this would keep the momentum of the paragragh moving a little more. 

Thanks for sharing and I will certainly read on. 

Sincerely 
Jared Osullivan